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Black Phantasm - Page 6 by Riniuu Black Phantasm - Page 6 by Riniuu
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Art & Characters  =Rini-tan
Please, don't copy, steal or re-upload my arts/characters or use them wrong in other ways.
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KanamexYuuki-fan Feb 12, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Wow. These are all so amazing :) Can't wait to see the next page :D :D :D :D :D
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This is so good! I'm really looking forward to the next page. 
Your style of drawing is really cute, and the plot seems like it's going be really fun as well! When or if you finish this, I think you really should consider publishing it.
It already looks extremely professional.
The only difference between this and the majority of published manga seems to be the lack of sound affect characters going across most of the panels. However, I also wouldn't even really define it as lacking, as the background or emotions from characters seem to clue you in.
Soo, yeah, I think I'm just going to click that stalk button on your page if I haven't already...
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BanditChan Feb 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Need... to... read... more... La la la la La la la la La la la la La la la la La la la la La la la la La la la la La la la la La la la la La la la la La la la la La la la la La la la la La la la la La la la la 
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Sukisshui Jan 15, 2014  Student General Artist
Erm... that was really shocking, the way she popped up didn't match her reaction xD
PARCEE LOOKS SO CUTE ;A;
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esmee7687 Dec 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
U need to publish this!!! It so good :>
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cherrydestinysakura Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I agree!!!! Kao Emoji-10 (Nod) [V1] 
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NotAnArtist99 Dec 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I like it! Please continue!! :D
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Vocaloid-Anime-FL Dec 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i think you're using too much layers on this manga.And I don't think the facial expressions are that good.I'm also getting kinda confused on the plot.I can't understand whats happening.No offense I swear but I think this still needs improvements.You know if you asked for a critique on your works i'll give you a long one.Your works are wonderful I swear but like I said still needs improvements. please don't get mad at me for this.i'm just sharing opinions.and oh i'm still a fan of yours and that doesn't change.but please don't reject my request for joining your fan club for this.
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Pbjamjam Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
what're you talking about? it looks beautiful and the facial expressions are adorable! 
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Vocaloid-Anime-FL Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yesh.i like the comedy.but im really confused in this one
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